BFOI R7 - OIT021 Pg19+20

- Round 7: A Shocking Deleopment

Feel free to hit the download button whenever you're having trouble reading this properly; it's full sized then and features even the slightest mistakes made - which I highly advice to ignore. Thank you very much. :3

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...The End?

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(That song was playing while I finished the page - quite fitting, isn't it?)

This is it, the final page, with Rhea lying wounded on the ground. I really have to admit that this ending wasn't planned this way, but it happened to turn out this way and... *sighs* to my shame I even almost cried when lettering this.

In case you don't understand the turn of the events completely (because I had to cut my explanations really short thanks to time pressure), feel free to ask! I am sure I can answer any question concerning this and the circumstances about Natsuki, no matter how weird it might appear.
There simply had to be a reason for this... maybe that's not what everyone's into, but I personally like mind control as a topic in general.

Well, this is it. The planned Epilogue page won't appear anymore - it's featured here instead. ovo

Now I'd like to come to an conclusion concerning my entry:
First of all, I did my very best this round. Of course, I could have done better, but then I had needed more time - otherwise this entry would have become as long as a manga or something. Since I don't like to make it short. But if I don't survive this round with this, nothing I could ever draw could.
And now I finally see improvement in my work, too. For a long time, I didn't realize that my drawing were getting better, but with this, I think I made one step forward. Especially these effects of the attacks improved greatly, in my opinion. Yet, I still have many, many things to learn.

Thanks for reading!
(might update desciption later, not sure though...)

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Miguel: [link]
Remi: [link]
Nelsan: [link]
Kiriana: [link]
Gia: [link]
Julian: [link]
Natsuki: [link]
Michaelle: [link]
Rhea: [link]